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Curling flames
Breast of fire
Burn thy soul
Flying higher

Heat of blaze
Warm the night
Brilliant scorching
Add moonlight

Beak, a dagger
Talons, steel
Pain be given
Pain thee feel

Hunt, Burn, Kill
Track, Char, Pain
Blood, Death, Darkness
Phoenix gain
:icongryphyn-bloodheart:
This was an excellent piece, although I remember making the mistake of showing it to a really near-sighted person. It's more than just about the macabre. Bad isn't always a plainly bad as it's originally seen.

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The first time I read this poem, I asked a good friend of mine what he thought of it. The said that it was really morbid. He missed the whole point.
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I really like it. You give the phoenix a very original sound. n.n
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*Gryphyn-Bloodheart Apr 22, 2005  Professional Writer
thank you
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!atomaweapon Apr 16, 2005   Interface Designer
someone needs some therapy
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*Gryphyn-Bloodheart Apr 16, 2005  Professional Writer
wtf? therapy for what?
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